This script seems to be breaking all the rules… beautifully. i.e.; a LISTLESS JANITOR as a description instead of a listless JANITOR. Don’t laugh! we are taught to use caps sparingly. The description of Mike’s hug with Stacey breaks the economy of words rule, in spades. Yet it succeeds in capturing the reader, as does descriptions of descriptions like “PORTRAIT OF A MAN WAITING IN A STATION.’
July 22, 2016 at 9:26 am
This script seems to be breaking all the rules… beautifully. i.e.; a LISTLESS JANITOR as a description instead of a listless JANITOR. Don’t laugh! we are taught to use caps sparingly. The description of Mike’s hug with Stacey breaks the economy of words rule, in spades. Yet it succeeds in capturing the reader, as does descriptions of descriptions like “PORTRAIT OF A MAN WAITING IN A STATION.’